Big Girls - Ch. 29.2

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  1. Suprina5:36 PM

    Going to take a break to eat and figure out what needs to happen next.

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  2. Subrina5:51 PM

    Oh I'm anxious to see how Ceasar will react when Subrina come over a 2 am knocking on his door...This is going to be interesting but a little bit hilarious...rofl

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  3. Anonymous6:28 PM

    i hated when family play you. You try to be nice and bam the run game on you trust me i been there. i'm glad that S going to help him out of this and can' wait to she take down the ranch. thanks for the updated.
    Trina.

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  4. Suprina7:00 PM

    To all: I think I know which direction I want to go in next, but it'll be a while before I'm done writing, researching, and editing it.

    Soooo....

    Look for the next posts to be on Friday throughout the day and night.

    Subrina: Based on the ideas swimming through my mind, their next encounter should be a funny one, definitely interesting. lol

    Trina: I hate when family play us too. But on the bright side of things for Neelam, at least now he can keep most of his money to himself.

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  5. Latrice12:06 AM

    Blaine is going to get it. This thing could truly backfire on him! Karianne doesn't know yet! Oh yeah this is the making of major drama and a big blowup!

    When Bree knocks on Caeser door at 2AM in this morning after the night they just had and the fight, it is going to be funnnny no matter how you write it Prina. But it just goes to show us, you never know where you might find yourself.

    I like the way Bree slid in that statement about Suge's retirement. Undoubtedly it's coming now because Neelam is out of the game.

    The family thing is what it is. I'm just glad that Neelam found out and can now change the pattern. Something we have to learn to do once we learn something about a situation or a person, we must change the pattern of behavior that we exhibit. We must become DIFFERENT!

    Loved this chapter Suprina. I really like the twists that are coming through so far. Was anyone else thinking it was Caeser at the door or more like hoping it was???

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  6. Suprina12:28 AM

    Latrice: I almost wrote that it was Caesar, but decided to go another way. lol. Either way, they HAVE to have another encounter tonight.

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  7. Community Girl6:40 PM

    "First of all, Nadira doesn’t weigh over a hundred and twenty pounds soaking wet,".... that's funny. :)

    Anther face off with Caesar... funny... interesting... ironic... destined???? :) Good twist. Good writing.

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  8. Suprina8:29 PM

    Comm/Girl: Glad you liked that quote about Nadira. tee-hee. Thanks for the compliments.

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