Mainstream stories from author Mi'Chelle Dodson(aka Suprina Frazier). All Rights Reserved Therein. (Publisher Website: http://www.bridgesandchannels.com)
To all: That's IT!!! Whew! I'm tired. So ready for bed. lol.I hope y'all enjoyed Subrina and Caesar's 1st love scene. I was so focused on writing, researching, and editing those posts that I couldn't tell if the reader enjoyment level was high enough. I was simply too close to the scene technically. I'll re-read it tomorrow for my own personal enjoyment. Tonight it was just work. lol.Much luv, y'all.P.S. I'll respond to comments tomorrow as well.
All I can say is...Mmmmmmmm Damn!
Well I'm about to take a cold shower and hit the bed...rofl...It was so worth the wait...Applause Suprina!!! Bravo!!!...Well written...Good nite
dam you need a smoke after this chatper lol girl that was hot hot hot. I would scream any thing toward that man lol big daddy what ever he wanted to hear lol. love the story girl and thanks for the updated. Trina.
Suprina you did your thing on that love scene, i'm speechless, like Anon i need a smoke, drink, cold shower, whew!!!! Was about to call 911 but don't want the fire to go out and don't need to be rescued!!! Now i'm gonna listen to Eric Benet - Chocolate Legs!!!
Ladies, Can you say MARGARITA MOMENT!!!!! I'm with Trina and Jo Jo, that's enough to make you need a drink! Big Daddy, Big Poppa, Just Big- Caeser put it on her! Yes sir! He broke her down to the lowest common denominator in a good way ladies! Jo-Jo, Chocolate Legs is absolutely right and Caeser had them everywhere! LOL.Our girl Bree was working him something serious wasn't she? SUPRINA-THAT IS THE BUSINESS RIGHT THERE! The first scene I've read of yours where you literally let the bodies do the talking!
Paula, Subrina, Trina, Ms Jo-Jo, & Latrice: Y'all got me grinning wide from your comments. I'm pleased that you were so pleased about this love scene. I was a little spacey yesterday and couldn't gauge it right. Thanks for being my barometers. Latrice: Thanks for noticing the differences in the love scenes. Something new is happening with this book and I'm just trying to go with the flow however these scenes come out.
WORDS CAN NOT DESCRIBE ME "LUST/LOVE" WITH THIS CHAPTER. I KNOW I HAVE HAD TO BRING OUT THE CAPS TWICE ALREADY IN THIS STORY. THIS CHAPTER RIGHT HERE WAS THE BOMB! I MEAN I COULD ALMOST FEEL HIM DRILLING INTO HER. YOU MADE THE WHOLE SCENE JUST COME ALIVE IN THE MOVIE THEATHER IN MY MIND. I UNDERSTAND SUBRINA FOR WANTING TO RESIST BECASUSE THE TIMING DOES SUCK, BUT WHO CAN RESIST ALL OF THAT MAN NOT BEGGING, BUT DEMANDING WITH THAT ARROGRANCE THAT YOU JUST LOVE TO HATE FOR HER TO SURRENDER COMPLETLY TO HIM. I HAD A FEELING THIS WAS COMING FROM HOW THEY WERE SO CONNECTED WITH THERE FEELING AFTER HE CAUGHT HER IN HER "KISS" WITH KARIANNE. I KNOW THAT AVALON WILL HELP ONCE ALL IS SAID AND DONE TO HELP THOSE TWO STAY TOGETHER. I THINK SHE CAN SEE THE CHEMISTRY THEY HAVE TOGETHER. IT'S NOT TO HARD TO SEE BECAUSE AT THIS MOMENT I THINK MT. KILAMAJARO JUST EXPLODED. I HAVE HOPE FOR OUR YOUNG LOVERS EVEN THOUGH SUBRINA DOESN'T. IN A SIDE NOTE I DON'T KNOW IF ANY OF YALL WATCH/WATCHED SEX IN THE CITY, BUT DO YOU REMEMBER THE EPISODE WHEN SAMATHA WORE THAT PEARL THONG FOR HER BO OF THE MOMENT AND BURNT HER VAY-JAY TRYING TO RUN WITH THOSE THINGS ON GOING UP THE STAIRS. IF NOT IT'S A MUST SEE VERY FUNNY EPISODE. ANYWHO SUPRINA, I WILL TRY TO BE PATIENT BUT I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT SCENE I AM ALL ABOUT THE CUDDLING AND TALKING, AND I DEF SEE A LONG TALK A COMING.
Carmel B: Girl, you are off the chain with those CAPS and all your comments. Mr. Kilamajaro? LOL!!!!I haven't seen that episode of Sex In The City, but it sounds hilarious. Wow! I need to watch more TV.As for the next chapter, it's going to have fireworks too...a different kind this time, so you might want to prepare yourself for some DRAMA. That's another reason why I'm posting slower today, trying to let y'all enjoy the loving moment a little longer before all hell breaks loose in the story again (spoiler).
Although we all say we want a drama free life we can only enjoy the good if we have a little bad. I personally believe it helps us to apperiate all the good that much more.
Suprina, Bree and Caesar have such a good connection (love) I believe they can weather whatever that is about to take place - Carmel B said Avalon would help, i'm with her, she believe she will be a influence to help Caesar get over what ever is about to happen - Bring on the drama, at least I can always re-read this chapter when I need to smile, laugh, scream!!! That's what memories do also don't they? Bree and Caesar will remember this first time for a long time :) Carmel B with the all caps, I was cracking up!!! folks think i'm crazy at work for real!!!
Carmel B: Preach, girl!Ms Jo-Jo: You're doing a little preaching yourself. I love your insight about one of the purposes of memories - to meet our need to smile, laugh, or scream. Excellent!