In another suite across town at a cheaper hotel, Murray Underwood, the private investigator who’d followed Aurelia from the states hung up the phone with a tired sigh. He’d just had the last of four intense conversations with his current clientele. Client #1 was overjoyed about Aurelia’s nuptials. Client #2 was relieved because as the wife of a wealthy man, Aurelia now posed no financial threat to him. Thus he could devote his remaining funds to his physical and financial recoveries. Client #3 was sad and disappointed that Aurelia was off the dating market. Yet he saw her marriage as a clear sign for him to just step aside. Client #4 was piping hot mad about those nuptials. He even planned to physically stop the wedding, but was delayed in London due to the bad weather currently swirling in the Atlantic Ocean . The end result was the same for Murray – loss of income. Only Client #1 felt the need to keep the P.I. on retainer for future updates about Aurelia’s life, but still o...
noooooooooooo....why that cliff hanger sup? just checked from my project work.. and now i am hanging till tuesday..so unfair,,lol..
ReplyDeleteNice one there.. love the flashback..so that's why she's sleeps once with guys.. it will take time gal.. but you will heal and I am not sure if meak is the guy for you yet..keeping my fingers crossed..maybe sup will introduce a new party along the line..(hint..make a nice twist don't you think?)
PRINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! YES IM SCREAMING...That was like having a dream and waking up just when it was about to reveal something. Oh my God, you did that to us! WOW! I love it but now we are on the edge of our seats and I have to call Maria back because she just called to talked to me about it..I didn't know what she was in such a hurry for me to read it for. now i know...Uhm, uhm, uhm.....
ReplyDeleteQwerty6: I like your twist. I'll think on it. It's still early in the story yet.
ReplyDeleteAs for the cliffhangers, I have a love/hate relationship with them. As a writer, I love them because they keep readers coming back. As a reader, I hate them because I wanna know everything NOW. LOL!
Latrice: I LOVE that you and Maria are discussing the story offline. It does my heart good.
ReplyDeleteOne day I hope she (and others who are reading along silently) will feel comfortable enough to share her thoughts with the rest of us. Until then, y'all continue do your thang however you please. I ain't complaining. Hugs!
It may be too soon for the kiss, and most defitinely too soon for anything else. She is still in too much pain from the past too get too involved. All it would be about right now is the sex.
ReplyDeleteWanda: Yes, it's too soon for the kiss...for most people. Racie is well, racy. That sista tends to move fast with certian things, sometimes to her detriment.
ReplyDeleteAlso, right now Racie is feeling like Halle Berry in that Monster's Ball love scene. She just wants somebody to make her "feel gooooooood". Funny, yet sad and true.