Friday, October 30, 2009

Big Girls - Ch. 46.3

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15 comments:

  1. I'm about to speak as a reader about this post and then as a writer.

    1. The twins - Heifers! I can't stand them at this point.

    2. Caesar - Grow up! Men!

    3. Ricky - Grrr...

    Now I'm about to speak as a writer.
    as much as I hated to do it, I had to write this scene like this in order to:

    1. Get Bree to do something about this scandalous sisters of hers.

    2. Get Bree to finally tell this man she loves him.

    3. Set the stage for new dynamics in the takedown.

    4. Bring Bree even closer to another P-Ranch girl.

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  2. Anonymous2:57 PM

    ok now you explain yourself i wont' have to hurt you lol . wow first he runs in to nanna then the twins wow this is going to be intersting very intersting. thanks for the updated.
    trina.

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  3. Girl, girl, girl, you won't believe i was thinking about him seeing the twins but said naw - you got me good, glad you gave the explanation - Bree better bring it on!!! her twin sisters are insane heifers!!!!

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  4. HAD TO TURN ON THE CAPS. I AM TPYING FAST AND FURIOUS SO EXCUSE THE GRAMMER. HOW DARE HIS NO TOOTH, COWARD, NEED TO GET A REAL JOB, PUNK BEHIND GON' DO SOMETHING DIRTY LIKE THAT. I CAN'T STAND HIM. EVEN THOUGH THE TWINS DON'T KNOW THAT IS THERE SISTA MAN HE IS SOMEBODIES MAN AND THEY NEED TO HAVE A NEW HOLE PUT IN THEY LITTLE BUTS FOR THAT ONE AND I AM SURE BREE IS THE RIGHT ONE TO DO IT. I UNDERSTAND YOUR REASONS SUPRINA, BUT I STILL DON'T LIKE IT. WHEN THE HIPPTY HOP IS C GOING TO GROW THE HECK UP? I HOPE SOON CAUSE I CAN'T EXPRESS HOW IMPORTANT IT IS TO AVOID EVEN LOOKING LIKE YOU ARE DOING EVIL. NO NOBODY IS PERFECT, BUT CERTAIN THINGS JUST AIN'T WORTH DOING WHEN YOU THINK ABOUT WHAT THE CONSEQUENCES CAN BE.

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  5. ONE MORE THING I AM PRAYING FOR A BIG PAYBACK FOR RICKY CAUSE HE DESERVES IT MORE THAN ANYBODY HIS ANTICS ARE REALLY JUST OUT OF THIS WORLD. I AM TALKING MORE THAN JUST A PUNCH IN THE FACE TO I MEAN MAJOR BEAT DOWN. HE OBVISOULY DID NOT GET BEAT ENOUGH AS A CHILD.

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  6. Posting for Paula again. This time Paula said...

    **STEAM IS COMING OUT OF MY EARS**

    THAT NO GOOD SON OF A SNAKE!

    HOW DARE HE SET MY BOY UP!
    THAT &*%&*& IS SUCH A DAMN COWARD, HATER AND PUNK!

    DID I SAY PUNK? I MEAN PANZY &^*!

    WE ALL SHOULD KICK HIS BUTT!

    LATRICE, CB, JO JO, SUBRINA LET US TAKE AN ELEVATOR RIDE AND KICK HIS BEHIND TILL KINGDOM COME!

    I AM UPSET!

    AS FOR BREE SHE BETTER LET THAT MAN EXPLAIN HIMSELF. I AM GOING TO COOL OFF AND GET BACK TO WORK!

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  7. LOL LOL LOL, i'm dying laughing at Paula and CC!!! OOh elevator ride!!!!

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  8. Trina: Please don't hurt a sista. lol. Sheesh! So violent! LOL!!!!

    Ms Jo-Jo: Insane heifers? Yeah, I like that description of the twins a lot better.

    Carmel B: Girl, you not only pulled out the CAPS, but you posted twice. LOL!!!! And you're so right about C needing to avoid even the appearance of evil. Yet another opportunity for him to grow. As for Ricky, he didn't beat at all as a child. Vickie never whipped him. Caesar got spankings though.

    Paula: I think you're going to be pleased by how Bree handles this situation. She's no dummy. When those pics get back to her, and you know they are, she's gonna know what Ricky is up to and act accordingly.

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  9. To all: That's all for tonight. Tomorrow be on the lookout for even more drama.

    Coming up next:
    ~Bree sees those pics of C and her sisters.
    ~Blaine has an unexpected confrontation.
    ~Bree and Dee-Dee get chummier.

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  10. Damn! BUST IT!! I have more to say but I am at work so I gotta go...

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  11. Cinquetta: LOL!!! I'm about go see what I can do to help C out a bit.

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  12. I thought Ceasar had matured past all this machoism. He says he loves Bree but how can he justify dancing with twins especially with Ricky around. Is C retarded??? He knows that Ricky will bust him out the first chance he gets and he gives him the evidence to do it. If he misses Bree so much then why couldn't have went back to his room alone and called her. Instead he dances with not one but two skinny females at the same time...Bad move C and it's all your fault.

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  13. Subrina: Caesar still has some growing to do. I like that he's usually so willing to change.

    And no, he's not retarded...LOL!...though I see why you would ask that. tee-hee.

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  14. Latrice11:59 PM

    Heifers?? I'm feeling more ahhhhhhh SKANKS!!!!! I didn't like'em when they first came on the scene earlier in the book and I don't like'em now! Have some respect for other people you little twits!

    Caeser- GROW UP! You were doing good when you said im taken but put some action behind them words, and GROW UP! I wanted to snatch him off the page talking about he gonna dance with them. I got a dance for him alright, have you heard of the sock it to me because clearly that's what he's asking for.

    Paula- You know I'm in, let's give to Ricky like he ain't never had it! Open up a can of whoop --- that won't ever close! Sorry yall, Ricky open the door and I just walked right on in. And Mercedes, I'll snatch the roots out of her head! Oh that just makes me MAD!

    Let's hope Bree gives our boy, our foolish boy yet another chance!

    Prina-Shun the very appearance of evil, good lesson girl because even though it might not be what it looks like, what it looks like does matter!

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  15. Latrice: Skanks is another good word to describe the twins.

    I'm still thinking about a fitting punishment for Mercedes behind this.

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