In another suite across town at a cheaper hotel, Murray Underwood, the private investigator who’d followed Aurelia from the states hung up the phone with a tired sigh. He’d just had the last of four intense conversations with his current clientele. Client #1 was overjoyed about Aurelia’s nuptials. Client #2 was relieved because as the wife of a wealthy man, Aurelia now posed no financial threat to him. Thus he could devote his remaining funds to his physical and financial recoveries. Client #3 was sad and disappointed that Aurelia was off the dating market. Yet he saw her marriage as a clear sign for him to just step aside. Client #4 was piping hot mad about those nuptials. He even planned to physically stop the wedding, but was delayed in London due to the bad weather currently swirling in the Atlantic Ocean . The end result was the same for Murray – loss of income. Only Client #1 felt the need to keep the P.I. on retainer for future updates about Aurelia’s life, but still o...
To those who read the short sample of Big Girls Won't Cry that's been out for about a year, you'll notice some slight changes in the beginning of the expanded story.
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1. The timeline of events is different.
2. Subrina's ex-husband is named Bryon now instead of Tyrone. I used the name Tyrone in another book recently and didn't want to have the 2 men confused.
I think that's all. Stay tuned for more soon...
Ahhhhhh! I have nothing else to say but Ahhhhhhh!
ReplyDeleteComm/girl: I don't know which part you're 'ahhh-ing' over, but thanks for the comment either way. lol.
ReplyDeleteLove that tidbit and the bluntness that Subrina used, we should try that more often, it goes a long way..... Leeshaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa girl don't do it, don't do it, it ain't worth it! Keep it coming!
ReplyDeleteLatrice: Subrina was on it that night. Leesha? Not so much. She probably should have stayed home and sat that one out, because she clearly wasn't emotionally ready to mingle...too desperate. Just sad.
ReplyDeleteI am loving Subrina's confidence and disliking Leesha's gullibility.
ReplyDeleteI used to be like that before my friend told me "you have to love yourself before anybody else can love you."
I hope she learns that before it is too late.
Paula: Kudos to your friend for giving you such excellent advice. I'm just glad you listened and put that advice to good use. Everybody don't, you know.
ReplyDelete@ Paula,
ReplyDeletethat is a good word about loving yourself... working on that myself right now. Slow and steady. :)
wow i know her friend wanted a man but she sholdn't have to settle for less just to be happy. wow that man has balls to walked up there and then check out another woman but wanted to talked to her friend lol men can't live with them and can't hurt them because you be lock up lol. like the story girl.
ReplyDeleteBigmNaomi: No, she shouldn't have to settle for less to be happy. It's sad that some women do though. I think what that dude did was highly disrespectful. I'm glad you like the story.
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