Pulling Him Back - Ch. 47.3

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  1. Suprina4:03 PM

    That's all for today. Tomorrow I will post the Epilogue and the Letter to Readers.

    Enjoy!

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  2. Anonymous5:29 PM

    Wow..........

    I did not see that happening. How ironic that Jinn would be the one to take him out. I guess we all assumed that he just wanted to forget what happened to him ans moved on with his life. I wonder how he is going to deal with what he did.

    I love this story and sad to see it coming to an end.

    Paula

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  3. Suprina11:16 PM

    Paula, I never focused directly on how he felt or left many big hints to his mental state. When it came time to use Heidi as a 'red herring' (a literary term for something/someone that draws reader interest away from the main issue/suspect), he was the perfect ace in the hole.

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  4. Suprina11:17 PM

    PS. You'll see how Jin is coping in the Epilogue.

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  5. Suprina7:14 PM

    Paula and others, you may want to re-read Ch. 29.1. I tweaked it a bit to give more hints into Jin's mental status.

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