Big Girls - Ch. 19.1

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  1. Suprina10:05 AM

    That's all for now. I'll TRY to post more later tonight. Looking forward to your comments.

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  2. Unknown10:20 AM

    i love the bonding between bree and avalon ...that song though just fueled subrina's anger even more now....

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  3. Suprina10:27 AM

    Kim: Yes, that song did set her off again. Yep! All day long. tee-hee.

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  4. Ms Jo Jo11:05 AM

    I'm glad Bree has a comfortable moment - but i suspect that Avalon ain't buying her identity and may be trying to pick up on something about Bree - hmmm.......Caesar a spy, the things folks do to find out more about a person :) i'm not mad at him :)

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  5. Suprina11:07 AM

    Ms Jo-Jo: You'll have to wait and see about Avalon. lol.

    As for Caesar playing I-Spy, I ain't mad at him either. Sometimes you have to do a little P.I. work just to know what kinda person you're really dealing with.

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  6. Subrina11:39 AM

    My opinion is that Avalon is not as innocent as Subrina think she is...I believe she knows more about this Leesha situtation that Bree thinks and that song was just dropping clues to help her with this case.

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  7. Ms Jo Jo12:02 PM

    Subrina - i'm with you - it was something that she said earlier in the story that makes me think she knows something and Bree's cover isn't totally fooling her.

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  8. Latrice7:18 PM

    Ms Jo-Jo, clue me in on what Avalon said please?

    I with all of you on Avalon, I believe she either is not as good as she seems, knows more than she's letting on or something. I hope that whatever it is doesn't ruin their budding friendship. Subrina doesn't seem to have many right now.

    Caeser, well alrite Mr. I-Spy but I ain't mad. Guess he had to do something during his waiting time. LOL.

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  9. Suprina12:54 AM

    Subrina, Ms Jo-Jo, & Latrice: This thing with Avalon is a wait-and-see moment. tee-hee.

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  10. Suprina10:25 AM

    To all: I was hoping someone would pick up on a particular revelation in this post, but since it hasn't happened yet, I'm thinking that it was meant for me to highlight it.

    Here goes...

    That line in Sara's song about wanting to drown in somebody's love and not feel their reign is potent stuff. The revelation(s) I got from that line are:

    1. People need to be able to trust us to love them without trying to CONTROL and MANIPULATE them.

    2. We need to be able to love others without feeling like we have to become less of who we are just to be with them.

    Okay, getting off my soapbox now, but I just HAD to bring those points to somebody's attention.

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  11. Anonymous5:31 PM

    i like that she has someone to bond with it nice to have a friend. cesare right be patiet and show her that you area a good guy. thanks for the updated.

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  12. Suprina6:19 PM

    Anon: That's not the only new friend I'm going to give Subrina in this story.

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