In another suite across town at a cheaper hotel, Murray Underwood, the private investigator who’d followed Aurelia from the states hung up the phone with a tired sigh. He’d just had the last of four intense conversations with his current clientele. Client #1 was overjoyed about Aurelia’s nuptials. Client #2 was relieved because as the wife of a wealthy man, Aurelia now posed no financial threat to him. Thus he could devote his remaining funds to his physical and financial recoveries. Client #3 was sad and disappointed that Aurelia was off the dating market. Yet he saw her marriage as a clear sign for him to just step aside. Client #4 was piping hot mad about those nuptials. He even planned to physically stop the wedding, but was delayed in London due to the bad weather currently swirling in the Atlantic Ocean . The end result was the same for Murray – loss of income. Only Client #1 felt the need to keep the P.I. on retainer for future updates about Aurelia’s life, but still o...
I am really loving Caesar!!!!
ReplyDeletePaula: Me, too. I think Subrina is going to need somebody like Caesar. Somebody that can make her laugh and restore her joy.
ReplyDeleteLove it; Love it; Love it; Love Ceasar! Love his mom! Love their relationship.... I am feelin all warm and cozy on the inside! Ahhhhhhh! :)
ReplyDeleteI feel like he's the one to bring a smile to Subrina face whether she wants to smile or not and I agree with Community Girl about him and his mom relationship...I always heard that I man who loves and respect his mother will do the same for his woman/wife...Can anybody tell me if that's true or not???
ReplyDeleteComm/Girl: I'm glad that post gave you that warm and cozy feeling inside. :)
ReplyDeleteSubrina: It's true in my hubby's case. Although he is not perfect by a long shot, he had a good relationship with his mother when she was alive and treats me very respectfully. My son has a good relationship with me and seems to treat the women he's dated respectfully as well.
I'm agreeing with Paula and Comm Girl: Loving Ceaser. I wasn't so sure about him at first because it was so vague but I think he's going to be a good catch. He would be the one to break Subrina down in a good way that is.
ReplyDeleteHis relationship with his mom is great! This is what I try to do with my son!
Latrice: Yeah, I deliberately glossed over Caesar at first because Ricky was the focal point and I wanted to flesh him out enough for everyone to at least understand him. Now it's Caesar's time to get fleshed out. Unlike Ricky, I hope everyone will like him.
ReplyDeleteThat's a good thing that you're doing with your son. I do the same with mine.
Thats was so beautiful, dont mind me i'm just feeling a little emotional lol!!!!
ReplyDeletebut seriously that was sweet as honey... and this is DEFINITELY THE START OF 1 OF YOUR BEST BOOKS SUPRINA!!!! I'M LOVING HOW THIS IS ALL GOING TO COME TOGETHER.... YAY!!! i dont know where u get these really great creative ideas but this just confirms you were definitely meant to be a writer!!!! You know i've read many of your books and sometimes i can already suss out the story line but i dont want to spoil it by asking too many questions... i'd rather let you unfold the story... i'm sooooooo loving this!!!!
Kim: Thanks, girrrrrl!!! And yes you do know where/Who I get these creative ideas from - God. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you're loving the story so much.
now this is how a grown man should be but tood bad they like a rare dieasse you only get them every blue moon lol. i like the bond he has with his mother it so sweet that he respect her and she does with him. i think S going to be that woman for him. thanks for the updated.
ReplyDeleteAnon: I'm digging Caesar's bond with Mama, too. I kinda borrowed from my own relationship with my son for that scene. I didn't realize how much until now.
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